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PROLOGUE. TO DAVID IN HEAVEN (pp. 1-14 in the 1863 edition).
The title is changed in the 1865 edition to ‘POET’S PROLOGUE. TO DAVID IN HEAVEN.’ v. 1, l. i: Lo! the slow moon foaming v. 1, l. iii: Furrowing with pearly front the jewel-powder’d sky! v. 1, l. ix: The foam-fringed moon above,—beneath, the river duskily flowing! v. 2, l. iii: Float o’er us to the pine-wood dark from yonder blue corn-ridge; v. 3, l. iv: Here of thee I ponder, v. 3, l. vi: The pale streets seem to stir and breathe beneath the white moon’s rays. v. 3, l. viii: By the dark hope bravéd, v. 5, l. ix: Is your young soul enswathed, at last, in the singing robes you fought for? v. 7, l. ii: Could your low voice reach me, v. 9, l. vi: And lo, pale Fortune’s knife of gold swift-lifted up to slay! v. 10, l. iii: The pallid moonlight trances me to utt’rance wild and weak; v. 11, l. iii: With gentle hand I touch the leaves, but cannot find you there! v. 12, l. iv: Pale promise, with sad sweetness v. 12, l. viii: By the dark hope bravéd, v. 13, l. vii: Ay, the pale moon beckons, v. 17, l. ix: That such pure song as sweetens Death can sweeten the singer’s life too! v. 18, l. vii: By the higher wisdom Verses 19 to 22 omitted. v. 19, l. i: But ah, that pale moon foaming v. 19, l. iii: Furrowing with pearly front the jewel-powder’d sky,
THE UNDERTONES
Introductory verse (p.15):
l. i: O Fame, thou haunting upward-urging hope, l. ii: That makest of the pale aspiring soul l. vi: In the swift current of our human life, l. viii: O Fame, teach thou this soul of mine to love
A shorter version of PROTEUS; OR, A PRELUDE, without the subtitle, appears as the final poem in the ‘Undertones’ sequence, before the Epilogue, in the 1863 edition.
ADES, KING OF HELL (pp.17-37).
The first and second verses are transposed. v. 2, l. i: ORB’D in a rayless realm, alone, v. 2, l. ii: Under the realm of sun and shower, v. 3, l. vi: That made black thunder in the air: v. 6, l. i: “Behold him—Dis!” the Father cried, v. 6, l. ii: And the voice shook my throne forlorn: v. 9, l. vii: Caught by the gnomes of earth and hurl’d down to my brazen seat. v. 12, l. vii: Mirror’d beneath me wondrously, loom’d white and round and cold. v. 13, l. vi: That faint sweet song of flowers and leaves, v. 17, l. vii: And balmy breath that mildly blew her rose-leaf lips apart,— v. 26, l. vii: What time cold ripples panted dark on queenly eyelids cold. v. 32, l. vii: But when I touch’d her to the soul, she darkly rose her height. v. 34, l. ii: Crouch’d groaning, but with glorious look v. 34, l. iii: She strangely silenced him, and took
PAN (pp. 38-58).
Page 43, l. ii: Ay, hear me grumble—rouse, ye sleepers, rouse Page 43, l. iii: Upon thick-carpeted Olympus’ top— Page 43, line inserted after l. x:
Light dawn’d on chaos like the ghost of form,
Page 43, l. xi: When the Deep murmur’d, and Eternity Page 44, line inserted after l. xv:
A muffled murmur as of numerous bees,
Page 44, l. xvi: A whisper such as low winds weave in June. Page 44, line inserted after l. xviii:
Twinkling like dew-drops on a lion’s mane,
Page 44, l. xxi: Like a great butterfly above a snake, Page 45, l. x: Brightening to the gurgling notes of birds; Page 46, lines inserted after l. xi:
From the spilt chrism of the dawn I drank Motion and thought and music unaware,
Page 46, l. xvii: Milky and fair-proportion’d, in a place Page 47, l. xxi: That widen’d in the eyeball unto the light, Page 48, l. v: By the grey comfort in the eyes of Zeus Page 49, line inserted after l. vi:
New joy and stranger glory, day by day,
Page 49, l. xi: That rack me in the season of black winds— Page 50, l. i: But earthquake-shaken hills, the courteous dales, Page 50, l. ix: Blacken to coal or redden into sand, Page 50, l. x: I, stirring in this specious dream of mine, Page 50, l. xvii: In blue and oily lapse to the far sea. Page 50, l. xxi: And, further, milky stalks of corn and flax, Page 50, l. xxii: And, even further, on the smooth hill sides Page 51, l. iii: A faint sweet picture of your bliss, O gods?— Page 51, lines inserted after l. iii:
They thank’d me, those mild men, whose silken skins Grew tough against the teeth of winds that crept From dim frost-valleys far beyond the hills, Keen winds that dying on my river’s marge, Only lent coolness to the lily, and made The apple in the mouth bite chill and sour—
Page 51, l. iv: They thank’d me, those meek shepherds, with the smoke Page 51, l. ix: By some lorn stream my mournful ditties old, Page 51, lines inserted after l. xvii:
Hideous to outward seeming, incomplete As the vex’d earth who dips one balmy side In sunshine, while the under side is dark And ribb’d with ice unmelted,—quaintly shaped—
Page 51, lines inserted after l. xxi:
By Heré’s haughty jealous eyes, by him Who glorified the lover in the god, And came to Danäe’s bower in golden rain—
Page 52, l. v: A gleam of milky moonlight on her limbs; Page 52, l. xiv: Startled with moonlight motion milky stalks Page 52, line inserted after l. xix:
By Hermes’ pandar-wand, it was not well!—
Page 53, l. xxiii: Breathed fear like hoar-frost, echoing “Artemis”; Page 56, l. iii: Wondrously woven about with mighty boughs— Page 56, l. xvi: Drinking the pallid glamour of thy speed; Page 56, l. xviii: Dwells a faint pallor enviably sweet, Page 57, l. v: And you—you paused in tumult, cried aloud, Page 57, l. xix: Trust me, I’d find for it a wit as keen Page 58, l. i: A godlike sight conceived harmoniously, Page 58, l. xix: That doze on high Olympus. Page 58, l. xxii: Beauteous and mildly beauteous, ere my rain Page 59, l. ix: Of some new wonder yet to come, I, Pan, Page 59, l. xvi: Shall hurl ye from Olympus to the depths, Page 59, line inserted after l. xx:
This hard integument of dark-brown skin,
Page 60, l. vii: To haunt the nervous regions of the air,
THE NAIAD (pp. 59-62).
v. 1, l. iv: That hive me in, the flowers v. 2, l. ii: Creep thro’ green darkness in the eventide;
THE SATYR (pp. 63-83).
‘The Satyr’ was extensively revised for the second edition so the 1863 version is reprinted below:
IV.
THE SATYR. _____
1.
THE trunk of this tree, Dusky-leaved, shaggy-rooted, Is a pillow well suited To a hybrid like me, Goat-bearded, goat-footed; For the boughs of the glade Meet above me, and throw A cool pleasant shade On the greenness below; And yet, all the while, Thro’ the boughs I can see A star, with a smile, Looking at me.
2.
The frolic and fun Of the day are done; Not a sound Breaks the wood’s repose, Save the leaves that close, Dusky and brown’d, With a whisper around, And hiving me neatly In this calm place, Where ’tis dark completely, Leave one small space Above—where the face Of my star shines sweetly.
3.
Full length I lie, On this mossy tree-knot, With face to the sky, The vast blue I see not; And I start in surprise From my dim half-dream, With the moist white gleam Of the star in mine eyes: So strange does it seem That the star should beam From her milky throne On this forest nook Of all others, and look Upon me alone: Ay, that yonder divine Soft face Should shine On this one place; And, when things so fair Fill the earth and air, Should choose to be, Night after night, The especial light Of a monster like me!
4.
Why, all day long, I run about Mid a madcap throng, And laugh and shout; I laugh and sing, I tumble and roll, Like a thing Without a soul.— Silenus grips My ears, and strides On my shaggy hips, And up and down In an ivy crown Drunkenly rides; And when in a doze His eyelids close, Off he tumbles, and I Can his wine-skin steal, I drink—and feel The grass roll—sea-high! Then my courage swells Into juicy fruit, And with shouts and yells, Down mossy dells, Which reel underfoot, I stagger after The wood-nymphs fleet, Who with mocking laughter And smiles retreat Upon glimmering feet; And just as I clasp A yielding waist, With a cry embraced, —Gush! it melts from my grasp Into water cool, And—bubble! trouble! Seeing double! I stumble and gasp In some icy pool!
5.
All suborn me, Flout me, scorn me! Drunken joys And cares are mine, Romp and noise, And the dregs of wine; And whene’er in the night Diana glides by The spot where I lie, With her maids green-dight, I must turn my back In a rude affright, And blindly fly From her shining track; Or if only I hear Her bright footstep draw near, Fall with face to the grass, Not breathing for fear Till I feel her pass.
6.
I am— I know not what: Neither what I am, Nor what I am not— I seem to have rollick’d, And frolick’d, In this wood for ay, With a beast’s delight Romping all day, Dreaming all night! Yet I seem To remember awaking Just here, and aching With the last forsaking Tender gleam Of a droll strange dream.— When I lay at mine ease, With a sense at my heart Of being a part Of the grass and trees And the scented earth, And of drinking the bright Subdued sunlight With a leafy mirth: Then behold, I could see A wood-nymph peeping Out of her tree, And closer creeping, Timorously Looking at me! And still, so still, I lay until She trembled close to me, Soft as a rose to me, And I leapt with a thrill And a shout, and threw Arms around her, and press’d her, Kiss’d her, caress’d her,— Ere she scream’d, and flew.
7.
Then I was ’ware Of a power I had— To drink the air, Laugh and shout, Run about, And be consciously glad— So I follow’d the maiden ’Neath shady eaves, Thro’ groves deep-laden With fruit and leaves, Till, drawing near To a brooklet clear, I shuddering fled From the monstrous shape There mirrorëd— Which seem’d to espy me, And grin and gape, And leap up high In the air with a cry, And fly me!
8.
Whence I seem to have slowly Grown conscious of being A thing wild, unholy, And foul to the seeing.— But ere I knew aught Of others like me, I would lie, fancy-fraught, In the greenness of thought, Beneath a green tree; And seem to be deep In the scented earth-shade ’Neath the grass of the glade, In a strange half-sleep: When the wind seem’d to move me, The cool rain to kiss, The sunlight to love me, The stars in their bliss To tingle above me; And I crept thro’ deep bowers That were sparkling with showers And sprouting for pleasure, And I quicken’d the flowers To a joy without measure— Till my sense seem’d consuming With warmth, and, upspringing, I saw the flowers blooming, And heard the birds singing!
9.
Yet I seem, In spite of the dream, To have dwelt for ay In a mad delight, Romping all day, Dozing all night— My rude face roughen’d By rain and breeze, My dark skin toughen’d Like the barks of trees, My wild heart gushing With dew-like fun, My beast’s brain flushing Like fruit in the sun!
10.
Wherever I range, Thro’ the greenery, That vision strange, Whatsoever it be, Is a part of me Which suffers not change.— A part Of my blood and heart.— The changes of earth, Water, air, ever-stirring, Disturb me, conferring My sadness or mirth: Wheresoever I run, I drink strength from the sun; The wind stirs my veins With the leaves of the wood, The dews and the rains Mingle into my blood. I stop short In my sport, Panting, and cower, While the blue skies darken With a sunny shower; And I lie and hearken, In a balmy pain To the tinkling clatter, Pitter, patter, Of the rain On the leaves close to me, And sweet thrills pass Thro’ and thro’ me, Till I tingle like grass. When lightning with noise Tears the wood’s green ceiling, When the black sky’s voice Is terribly pealing, I hide me, hide me, hide me, With wild averted face, In some terror-stricken place, While flowers and trees beside me, And every streamlet near, Darken whirl, and wonder, Above, around, and under, And murmur back the thunder In a palpitating fear!
11.
Ay; and when the earth turns A soft bosom of balm To the darkness that yearns Above it, and grows To dark, dewy, and calm Repose,— I, apart from rude riot, Partake of the quiet The night is bequeathing, Lie, unseen and unheard, In the greenness just stirr’d By its own soft breathing— And my heart then thrills With a soft sensation Like the purl of rills Down moonlit hills That loom afar, With a sweet sensation Like the palpitation Of yonder star!
12.
Ho, to climb To that sublime White light above me, Who, of all the big sky Chose that one place on high, And seems to love me! For all the night My face I turn to her, And softly yearn to her, And meekly bright, With faint flame stirring, She thrills for delight Of the bliss she’s conferring.
13.
Thro’ yonder bough Her white ray twinkles; And on my brow She silently sprinkles A dewy rain, That lulls my brain To a dream of being Under the ground, Blind to seeing Deaf to sound, Drinking a dew That drops from afar, And feeling unto The sweet pulse of a star, Who is beckoning me Though I cannot see! And of suddenly blooming Up into the air, And, swooning, assuming The shape I wear! While all fair things Fly night and day from me, Wave bright wings, And glimmer away from me!
14.
If I must climb To that light sublime, And never reach her,— But increase in self-fearing, Self-seeing, self-hearing,— I beseech her To resolve me anew Into the dew Of this wood-nest green— This dew, Which (for aught I knew!) I may have been— Then, while I lie low, Unconscious and dumb, Exhale me slowly To her bosom holy— Whence (for aught I know!) I may have come.
15.
—She shines above me, And heareth not, Though she smiles on this spot And seems to love me. Here I lie aloof, Goat-footed, knock-kneed, A monster, indeed, From horns to hoof; And the star burns clearly With pearl-white gleam— Have I merely Dream’d a dream? Am I nought, In form or thought, Save the monster I seem? Have I dwelt for ever In the wood with the rest, Changing never,— A monster, at best?
16.
’Tis a puzzle, to ponder If yonder Soft light, changing not, Will always be shining Thro’ the intertwining Boughs on this one spot? The seasons change, Leaves redden and fall— Some influence strange Is at work, over all: Can a thing such as I Remain while the fair Shapes of earth, water, air, Come and die? And will the time come When the star there will see No fellow stretch’d dumb On the trunk of this tree, While his thoughts come and flee Drowsily? And will she take flight, When no more she can be The bright Especial delight Of a monster like me?
17.
—Did she hear me, I wonder?— She trembles upon Her throne—and is gone! The boughs darken under, Then thrill, and are stirr’d By the notes of a bird. The green grass brightens With pearly dew, And the whole wood whitens As the dawn creeps thro’.— “Hoho!”—that shout Flung the echoes about The boughs, like balls! Who calls?— ’Tis the noisy rout Of my fellows upspringing From sleep and dreaming, To the birds’ shrill singing, The day’s soft beaming: While the whole wood moves As the Sun-god dawns, They are beating the lawns With their noisy hooves; And they madly go To and fro, Though o’ nights they are dumb. Hoho! hoho! I come! I come! Hark!—to the cry They reply: “Ha, there, ha!” “Hurrah!”—“hurrah!” And startling afraid At the cries, In the depths of the glade Echo replies— “Ho, there!”—“ho, there!”— By the stream below there The answer dies.
VENUS ON THE SUN-CAR (pp. 84-88)
Original title: VENUS CYTHEREA. v. 1, l. xiv: Round the white silence of the world, v. 2, l. iii: Like fairies darkly dozing— v. 2, l. xii: Keen-pricking as we go by v. 2, l. xiii: Sharp tiny rifts in ice and snow v. 2, l. xiv: Where ice-drops roll and melting show v. 2, l. xv: Shapes for flowers to grow by. v. 2, l. xvii: Flutter above thee, hanging bright v. 2, l. xx: Hideth in cloudy snows his fire, v. 3, l. ii: Radiant-lock’d and glorious one, v. 3, l. vii: Thou whose eternal brightness throws v. 4, l. iii: Ice-sparkling pallid skies up,— v. 4, l. xx: And, somewhat pale with your last kiss,
SELENE THE MOON (pp. 89-93).
v. 1, l. ix: As white as a star and as cold as a stone, v. 2, l. xx: And the spell of a voice from Olympus shaken v. 4, l. xiv: But Destiny sits on his cloud-shrouded throne,
IRIS THE RAINBOW (94-97).
v. 1, l. ii: Of Olympus I arise, v. 1, l. xxii: A deep gleam of milky fire—
ORPHEUS THE MUSICIAN (pp. 98-102).
‘Orpheus The Musician’ was extensively revised for the second edition so the 1863 version is reprinted below:
VIII.
ORPHEUS THE MUSICIAN. _____
I SAT of old beside a stream new-born Out of the loamy loins of mountains cold, And it was garrulous with dreams forlorn And mystic legends old.
Wherefore the secrets of the peaks and caves With the faint music in mine ears were blended; And as the stream slid down to ocean-waves, I heard and comprehended.
Into a moss-soft silence dim and deep I sank with murmurous sighs and drowsy nods: Then, opening eyes, like one who starts from sleep, I sang the birth of gods.—
A gleaming shoulder cut the stream, and lo! The Naiad rose to hear me melodise; She, like a blue-vein’d lily white as snow, Floated, with half-closed eyes.
And, ere my eyes were ’ware, the boughs around Were populous with faces strange and glad, That droopt pale under-lips and drank the sound, And grew divinely sad.
Far down the glade where many shadows slept, Stain’d purple with the swollen leaves of vine, I saw Silenus:—liquid music crept Into his blood, like wine:
Tiptoe, like one who fears to break a spell, He crept to me, with eyeballs blank as glass— Not drawing breath till, at my knees, he fell Full length upon the grass:
Then, leaning his fork’d chin upon his hand, He listen’d, dead to drunken joy and strife, And lo! his face grew smooth and soft and bland With some sublimer life.
Goat-footed fauns and satyrs one by one, With limbs upon the sward at random thrown, Gather’d, and darken’d round me in the sun Like moveless shapes of stone:
And straight before me, o’er the green hillside, Quaint shapes across the sunset linger’d bright, Till the white eyes of heaven opening wide Swam dewy, in delight.
The dusky twilight rustled o’er the place, Full of sweet airs and odour and cool shade, But music made a lamp of every face In the swart forest-glade:
Then, in a pearly shower of cool moonbeams, Upsprang Silené to her azure arc, Scattering light and silence and sweet dreams On weary eyelids dark:
The music sadden’d, the moist greenwood stirr’d And sigh’d. the moonlight clothed us in its veil, And stooping down the milky goddess heard The music and grew pale:
For as they listen’d, satyrs, nymphs, and fauns Grew credulous of their immortality— Yea, the weird spirits of the woods and lawns, Gross, weak, and vile to see—
Whence her pure light disturb’d them, and they strove With wild scared looks to fright away the charm; But the bright light grew brighter, from above Shaken with pearly arm.
They could not fly, they could not move nor speak, The music held them like a hand of strength— They hid their faces, wild, abash’d, and weak, And, list’ning, writhed full length.
The Naiad lifted up her dewy chin, And heard, and knew, and saw the light with love, Made peaceful by a purity akin To that faint face above.
And countless beauteous spirits of the shade Were conscious of themselves and felt no fear; Far Echo, nestling in green silence, made Answer that all could hear.
Till, when I ceased to sing, the satyrs rush’d Back to their sports, to riot and carouse; Self-fearful faces of the forest blush’d And rustled into boughs;
Lastly, Silenus to his knees upcrept, Rubb’d his blear’d eyelids puffy like the vine, Stared blankly round him, vow’d that he had slept, And bawl’d aloud for wine.
POLYPHEME’S PASSION (pp. 103-140)
Page 101, l. viii: With your beard of a goat and your eyes of a lamb? [In the earlier version of the poem, ‘you’ and your’ etc. were mostly used throughout, instead of ‘thee’ and thine’. I have not bothered listing all such variations.] Page 102, l. ix: Gushing like sunshine in your dry heart’s core, Page 103, l. iv: Rounding its smooth mild waves into the creek, Page 103, l. viii: My shoulder. Turn your face on mine, Silenus! Page 109, lines inserted after l. xix:
Now, like a bright Bird startling thro’ The rainy greenness of a shadowy glade, And scattering the pearly drops of dew With quick sharp fluttering light That dying deepens the shade, A fancy leaps up glad beyond control— Then fades along their depths into the soul.
Page 110, lines inserted after l. ii:
As lightnings seem to wake the waves white-crested. There’s nothing, nothing, nothing anywhere, Humanely or divinely manifested, That can with them compare; And yet they seem to share The glory of all things, palpably invested With all the wonders of earth, ocean, air.
Page 110, l. xii: For she you worship is of that fair race Page 111, l. iv: Cannot this eye peer to Olympus’ helm? Page 112, l. i: On the broad wonder of my noble brow, Page 114, line inserted after l. v:
Like a great cloud dark-sleeping in the sun,—
Page 116, l. ix: Cyclops! sweet Cyclops!—you appal me! Page 119, l. xvi: Horrors thicken, demons swarm, Page 119, l. xxi: Waves they hear not on the bier, Page 126, lines inserted after l. ii:
Gentle Silenus!
SILENUS.
Beautiful Cyclops!
POLYPHEME.
Nay, Not beautiful, Silenus?
SILENUS.
But I say Most beautiful, and fearlessly I dare Utter the truth. By him whose shoulders bear The great round world, by Atlas’ self, I swear Thou art most fair!
Page 127, l. xvii: Not to be lightly won or roughly gain’d. Page 132, l. v: Clear is Galatea—dear is Galatea— Page 132, l. ix: When the great sea wildly rise, there is terror in her eyes, Page 132, l. xvi: Rare sits Galatea—fair sits Galatea— Page 134, l. xiii: Fades Phœbus crimson-crested, Page 136, l. vi: And—grasp the thing you pant for now in vain, Page 136, l. vii: Ay, hold her fast, and if you choose intreat her—
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Undertones - The 1863 Moxon Edition - continued
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